Kia Ora Charlie, I like your poem, because I like how you detailed what you put in the box and what's already in the box. The poem you wrote was amazing and I think the choice of words was very good. I think it reminded me of when I wrote my monster poem. Next time add some more sentences and try to get longer sentences.
Kia Ora Charlie,
ReplyDeleteI like your poem, because I like how you detailed what you put in the box and what's already in the box. The poem you wrote was amazing and I think the choice of words was very good. I think it reminded me of when I wrote my monster poem. Next time add some more sentences and try to get longer sentences.
Hi Ry its Charlie, Thank you for the comment. I will fix up the picture's. Thank you again.
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