Cars

My friend Daniel and I did a slideshow about cars for free time writing.

Here is our work.

Planes

My friend Daniel and I did some free time writing on planes because we love planes.
Here is our work.

The Beekeeper

Quick Write Number One - The Beekeeper

For the next two weeks we are going to work on ‘Quick Writes.’  This is where you are given something to write about (a writing prompt) and you only have 10mins to write as much as possible using this writing prompt.

For our writing prompts we will use either images or short videos.

The purpose of this is to practise writing fluently.

When we look at our writing prompt we will have about 10-15 mins to discuss it and brainstorm some ideas and vocabulary.   

Our learning goals are to:

-write a description, using powerful words and phrases

-include some Te Reo Māori

-carefully check that our sentences make sense and have correct punctuation and spelling.

When we are writing we need to think about…

1. What do I want my reader to see?

2) What do I want my reader to hear?

3) What do I want my reader to smell?

Tips:

-look closely at the picture or video

-think about the three key questions and the learning goals

-give yourself time to plan and write

Do your writing here

The day was as hot as fire in spring. The bees were collecting pollen off the new and sweet blossoms bursting on the trees. The wind was so cold the animals were hiding away. The beekeeper came out of his marae as quiet as a lion about to pounce on its prey.

Narrative Writing

This month we have been learning about narrative writing. Here is my story.

Construction Party

This month we have been learning about the 2017 election. Daniel and I made up our own party. Here is our work.


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