Here is my work.
Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Karoro School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Wednesday, 26 July 2017
Tuesday, 25 July 2017
Te Ra The Sun
As part of Matariki I did my own version of Te Ra the sun. Here is my art. We did this artwork after we read legends about Maui.😉
Monday, 24 July 2017
Classroom Kupu
We have been learning to say the names for classroom objects in Te Reo Māori. Here is the slideshow I did with my friends to show my learning.
Thursday, 6 July 2017
Science Term 2 2017
This term we have been doing some science. We have been learning about the water cycle and the 5 states of matter. Here is some of my learning.😎
Persuasive Writing-Why we should have pets
This Term we have been learning about persuasive writing. Here is my piece of work about why it is a good idea to have pets. 😁
Title
A Short Statement about the topic.
eg. ‘Rugby League Is A Great Sport’
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Pets Are In The Family
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Overview/ Statement of position
A brief statement of your view about the topic. What you believe or want to argue.
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I think it is a good idea to have pets in the family.
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Series of Arguments
Reasons
Your points supporting your view about the topic. Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments.
Remember
-argument
-supporting detail, reasons, examples
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Firstly, pets ( especially dogs ) can sniff cancer so you will know when you have cancer. If you think you’ve got cancer you can get a dog to sniff you and then you will know. Dogs have very sensitive noses which is great for sniffing out certain diseases.
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Secondly, when you are feeling down pets will cheer you up. People who suffer from depression often find that pets can cheer them up and make them happy. Some hospitals and rest homes let pets come to visit because pets are important to people when they are unwell.
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Thirdly, pets can be trained to do lots of different things.
Pets can be trained to do specific jobs like a police dog to track down criminals or sniffer dogs who work at the airports to sniff out drugs and other bad things. Dogs can be trained to bring in the morning paper and also to piddle in one place on your lawn so your whole lawn doesn’t get wrecked.
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Finally, pets are good for exercise. Pets like exercise heaps so it is good to get out of your house and go play with your pets. Pets are VERY fun to play with. So kids get out of your home and go play with your pets ( that includes adults to ).
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Concluding statement
Summing it up. A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.
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It is a good idea to have pets because they are comforting, they can be trained to do jobs, they are good for people with diseases and they are good to get you off your butt. I think it is a great idea to have pets.
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