Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Karoro School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Wednesday, 28 February 2018
Friday, 16 February 2018
The Learning Dip
This term we have learning about having a growth mindset. We have been working on a poster about the learning dip. Here is my work.😶
Monday, 11 December 2017
Whakairo (carving)
For the past two weeks we have been learning about whakairo (carving). We carved soap and did a DLO on carving.
Here is me and my friend's work.
Tuesday, 21 November 2017
Tips For The Bush And More...
This week we are going on camp. We had to get into groups to share our knowledge about hypothermia and the bush. Here is Our work.
Friday, 29 September 2017
Wednesday, 27 September 2017
The Beekeeper
Quick Write Number One - The Beekeeper
For the next two weeks we are going to work on ‘Quick Writes.’ This is where you are given something to write about (a writing prompt) and you only have 10mins to write as much as possible using this writing prompt.
For our writing prompts we will use either images or short videos.
The purpose of this is to practise writing fluently.
When we look at our writing prompt we will have about 10-15 mins to discuss it and brainstorm some ideas and vocabulary.
Our learning goals are to:
-write a description, using powerful words and phrases
-include some Te Reo Māori
-carefully check that our sentences make sense and have correct punctuation and spelling.
When we are writing we need to think about…
- What do I want my reader to see?
2) What do I want my reader to hear?
3) What do I want my reader to smell?
Tips:
-look closely at the picture or video
-think about the three key questions and the learning goals
-give yourself time to plan and write
Do your writing here
The day was as hot as fire in spring. The bees were collecting pollen off the new and sweet blossoms bursting on the trees. The wind was so cold the animals were hiding away. The beekeeper came out of his marae as quiet as a lion about to pounce on its prey.
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