Descriptive Writing

At the moment in class we have been working on descriptive writing. We have been using pictures to give us ideas of what to write about. Here is my work: 

The Big, Fat Dino                               

I looked into the bright and yellow eye of the statue of the big, fat Dino and it blinked! I was scared for my life and nearly fainted. I knew it was scary but its body was astonishing.

It went ROARRR!!! Its roar was as loud as tnt exploding in an old mine. The tail was wagging as if it liked me. When its long pointy tail wagged it nearly knocked me over. His ears were pointy and big. It was weird because its ears were too big for its head and its eyelids were too small for its eyes. His nose was as big as my hand although my hand wasn't really big at all. Its scales looked as hard as diamonds being forged underground. Its scales were a mixture of blue and brown. It was as big and long as the London Tower Bridge ( I’m surprised it fits in the museum). I looked away and the Dino ate me up and swallowed me whole without chewing. I’m writing this story from inside the Dinos body! I bet that’s got you thinking?

Here is the link to the original work.